But sadly the weak script lets him down here.

The improbable plot is not helped by a weak script.

Otherwise it is an average film with a weak script spoiling the show.

A critic at Rediff.com complained of a weak script and story line.

Main draw back of David is its too slow and weak script.

Film critics immediately latched on to the weak script.

Rarely has a weak script relied so completely on pretty people with big names to carry every line through".

Dreadcentral.com gave the film a negative review, however commented that the cast performed well despite the weak script.

The musical opened in January 1940 and, some reviewers thought because of a weak script, closed five days later.

Both usually give credibility and strength to movies with such weak scripts.